Here's my first one on grass:
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I improved them a bit after that but then recently started traveling waaay back. That's still one of my main concerns, although I managed to reduce the travel quite a bit this afternoon. I unfortunately seem to have introduced an uneven shoulder throw though. Here's the current one on the trampoline. Ones on the ground are usually tighter I think, but I'm trying to save my ankles.
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Mostly looking for advice on how to fix the set right now. I think I know how to fix the shoulder throw, and I know I untucked way too soon. Other suggestions appreciated as well though.