This is one of my better ones. Just wondering how I can improve.
Arabian Critique
Started by aiken54, April 15, 2014 · 2 Replies · 1,163 Views
It's not bad:)
You are undercutting it by twisting too early and not going for height.
http://youtu.be/rqDP1yyoZVE?t=58s I learned them from this video. Especially Erik (bald one) and Cherepko (black sweatpants) are doing them very well. Watch there hands and chest as they go up. In fact whole video is very informative if you are into more freerunning/tricking stuff.
Ahh, gotcha. That was my problem when I wasn't landing them at all, now it's still my problem 
I had a super clean one the other day, but it was just one. Thanks for the reply!