First Successful Full Lay Erb and Subsequent Attempts Critique

Title says it all.

 

What do you guys think?

 

Same criticism as yesterday. Any reason you started a new thread?

Looks good, however, you're slightly piked!

Your hips seems to be piked before the planche push up.

The SA planche press to hs starts with feet lower then the hips.

You don't start on free hs and you don't finish on free handstand.

Fix these points.

Well I want this thread to be geared towards a couple of my best attempts. The other thread will be used for posting one week routines or daily routines. Which would you prefer to see? Weekly or daily training videos?